ਮੀਂਹ ਤੋਂ ਬਾਅਦ
ਪਤਿਆਂ ਤੇ ਬੂੰਦਾਂ
ਟਿਪ-ਟਿਪ ਟਿਪ-ਟਿਪ !
meenh ton baad
patteyan te boondaan
tip-tip tip-tip !
after the rain
droplets on leaves
drip-drop drip-drop !
patteyan te boondaan
tip-tip tip-tip !
after the rain
droplets on leaves
drip-drop drip-drop !
- You, Amarjit Sathi Tiwana and Kalim Bandaicha like this.
Amarjit Sathi Tiwana ਬਹੁਤ ਹੀ ਵਧੀਆ ਹਾਇਕੂ ਹੈ। ਮੁਬਾਰਕ! ਪੱਤਿਆਂ ਤੋਂ ਪੱਤਿਆਂ 'ਤੇ ਚੋ ਰਹੇ ਰਹੇ ਪਾਣੀ ਦੀ ਟਿਪ-ਟਿਪ ਟਿਪ-ਟਿਪ ਸੁਣਾਈ ਦਿੰਦੀ ਹੈ।
- Rosie Mann thank you very much indeed Sathi ji ! for appreciating , for acknowledging and above all introducing me to this fun-filled style of writing :))
- Rosie Mann dhah=support ?
nheriyan ,jhakhadd vee fakeeran da khyaal rakhh jande nay !!
bahot vadiya ,Panesar Saahab ! 
Dalvir Gill No Rosie, Dhah (ਢਾਹ ) is like erosion. U know how these journalist kind guys are, they believe in only crude facts of life, which makes 'em blind 2wards the underlying truth. Fact and truth are different things. A cobra provided shade to Nanak is truth not fact. Where ever Mohamed traveled a cloud provided him w/ shade isn't a Fact but is a Truth. ( Shelley Veere, I didn't intend anything against u, in particular nor do I M carrying any venom against journalists, in general. It's just interesting for me to notice two contradicting interpretations imagined for the same thought.)- Dalvir Gill Thanx for meeting my acceptations I had. I intended that as a pun. I'll stop this right here as this space must be used for Haiku only, but thanq again for being such a nice support.
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