scarred moon . . .
bumble bees sitting on
a fading flower
bumble bees sitting on
a fading flower
- Christopher Provost likes this.
Dalvir Gill the surface of the moon has scars on it. bees are sitting on the flower. rest is for the reader- Robert D. Wilson You have written an illustrative haiku. Line one illustrating lines 2-3. Hokku is a different genre. Read my newly posted note.
- Robert D. Wilson I can be a hard mentor, I am told. But i do so because I want all of you to be the very best!
- Dalvir Gill Mentor should be Hard, I believe. ( But not harsh, which you are not. ) I read your post before reading your comment and felt that it was directly in response to this haiku and I commented ,"Message received." I know I need to read a lot more on Japanese Aesthetics and humbly request you to write a write-up on each aspect that can be of great help to many. I do spend a lot time reading your web postings ( Interviews and all ) they are of great help. Thanks Robert.
- Robert D. Wilson Thank you. I suggest reading my 5 essays and postscript on Japanese haiku aesthetics.
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