Dalvir Gill‎ - a mountain river way more than water against boulders

Dalvir Gill‎Hokku Workshop - Zoka

January 4, 2013 · Brampton ·

a mountain river
way more than water
against boulders

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  Robert D. Wilson A nice sentiment but something most readers already know.
  
  A possibility:
  
  more than water,
  this river churning thoughts . . .
  granite sentries

  January 5, 2013 at 2:18am · Like · 1
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  Dalvir Gill they have gotten me so scared of the "Personification" that ........

  January 5, 2013 at 12:55pm · Like · 1
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  Robert D. Wilson Personification is okay, Dalvir. The taboo given to it are errors from Blyth and Yasuda that have become doctrine for many English language haiku groups. Issa, Buson, and Bashō all used personification at times. They were animist or animist influenced. One of my essays in a previous issue of Simply Haiku address this thoroughly.

  January 5, 2013 at 7:20pm · Unlike · 4
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  Dalvir Gill i find that common among Tantric, Buddhist, Tao(ist), Zen, all Non-Dualistic branches of Hinduism, even the faith i was 'born in', sikhism, live in an awe of this mysterious oneness, Zoka

  January 5, 2013 at 7:37pm · Like · 3