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Notice the 's' sounds - creating the sound of glass bangles.
passing clouds
he slips glass bangles
over my wrist This haiku won the Snapshot Press Calender award.
Notice the 's' sounds - creating the sound of glass bangles.
passing clouds
he slips glass bangles
over my wrist This haiku won the Snapshot Press Calender award.
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- You, Ranjit Singh Sra, Surmeet Maavi, Tushar Gandhi and 5 others like this.
Dalvir Gill when Basho suggested to speak you hokku out loud, at least for one hundred times, what exactly he meant - this one clarifies it.
Jayashree Maniyil This took me a while. Probably there is more or something different hidden that I am yet to see. For now I see a brief rainbow after a shower.
Kumarendra Mallick The clouds, I think Jaya, can represent many things: passage of time, rich colours (parallel to those of the bangles), shifting of emotions, bearing water like heart carrying love and so on. Lovely one, Kala.- Kala Ramesh Ha ha! Jayashree. Nothing so complicated?!
I had gone to Hyderabad, and was at Charminar with my school friend who lives there. While I was choosing glass bangles, the vendor deftly held my hand and slipped the bangles .
An ordinary moment. It's just the play of 'sss' that gives the sound like glass bangles when read aloud.
Of course, if one is like Mallick, they'll see other 'colours' too
but yes, to his interpretation of clouds, with its jux to the event being played on earth. - Kumarendra Mallick There is 's' in your and Kala's name, Jaya. Hand of the girl is soft (there is 's' in it). Everywhere 's' including the sky!
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