Haiku Chaos: 5-7-5

Dalvir Singh Gill‎ਪੰਜਾਬੀ ਹਾਇਕੂ حائیکو پنجابی Punjabi Haiku

October 5, 2012 · Brampton ·

ਜਦ ਤਕ ਗਿਣੇ
5-7-5
ਤੂਫ਼ਾਨ ਗਾਇਬ

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Gurmail Badesha, Nirmal Brar and 21 others like this.
Sahib Singh hahahhaha shukar aa je 10-14-10 nahi gin ne pae nahi te din agla chad jana si ---hahahha

October 5, 2012 at 8:47pm · Unlike · 2
Sahib Singh bahut sohna dalvir bhaji

October 5, 2012 at 8:50pm · Unlike · 1
Dalvir Singh Gill lol, you have a good sense of humor

October 5, 2012 at 8:56pm · Like · 2
Sahib Singh 5 ---- ਪਰਮੇਸ਼ਰ
7 ---- ਸਤਿਗੁਰੂ ਪੂਰਨ
5 --- ਪਰਮ ਪਿਤਾ...See More

October 5, 2012 at 9:01pm · Unlike · 4
Sahib Singh fer tufaan nahi langhan dende

October 5, 2012 at 9:09pm · Like
Dalvir Singh Gill ਮੇਰਾ ਮਤਲਬ ਅਖਰਾਂ ਦੀ ਗਿਣਤੀ ਨਹੀਂ "ਅਸੂਲ" ਹਨ
ਤੇ ਅੱਜ ਪੋਸਟ ਕੀਤੀਆਂ ਵਿਚੋਂ ਇੱਕ ਕਹਿੰਦੀ ਹੈ “By the time a thing is / noticed, it has happened.” —Kay Ryan

October 5, 2012 at 9:11pm · Like · 2
Sahib Singh yea me samaj giaa sir...bahut bahut kamaal hai....

October 5, 2012 at 9:14pm · Like · 1
Dalvir Singh Gill Sabi Bhaa, ih sir kee topee!!

October 5, 2012 at 10:28pm · Like · 1
Tejinder Singh Gill Very Niiiiiiiice........!

October 6, 2012 at 2:52am · Unlike · 1
Umesh Ghai Bhaa Ji difference of Opinion......... Je ehna vidwana ne Haiku nu Rules ch hi banhna hai ta 5-7-5 vi bura nahi...... Balke mai ta eh kehna ke Hailu da rule iko bana deo ke 5-7-5 ch hi howe. Fer dekhde aa kinne ku par lagde aa...... ha ha ha ha ha ha

October 6, 2012 at 3:42am · Unlike · 2
Sahib Singh Dalvir Gill bhaji jado tusi samjhaunde hovo fer te banda sir kehna .....agge piche bhaji jinda baad

October 6, 2012 at 5:43am · Unlike · 1
Dalvir Singh Gill Sabi Nahal Veere, Umesh Kumar Ghai dee gll nuN hazme naal sun ke vadheea jwab de. mutual. mein tera jwab da treeka sabh toN vadhia samjhdaN SachcheeN-MuchcheeN!

October 6, 2012 at 5:48am · Like · 1
Sahib Singh hahahha ...tusi te hawa bharti mere ch ji..me te hale chaah vi nahi peeti

October 6, 2012 at 5:50am · Unlike · 1
Sahib Singh Umesh Kumar ji je tuhanu ek kamre ch band kar deiey..fer dekhde tusi kinna ku sair spata karde ho...lol...eh 5-7-5 da lock kai vaari haiku nu ohdi asal udari nahi bharan denda...ajjad lok ajjad soch ajaad haiku....

October 6, 2012 at 5:51am · Unlike · 1
Dalvir Singh Gill Sabi ikk taN gll hai ki aoukh taN vichaar pesh krn 'ch hi hai naN? nahin taN bass giN ke akhkhr chin dene ne. sachmuch koee udaaree nahi lagugee.

October 6, 2012 at 5:57am · Like · 1
Sahib Singh eh te hai...kai vari te 5-7-5 ba- kamaal ho janda te bahuti wari rooh nahi hundi..rooh lai giaa 5-7-5 ni haiku bejaan reh giaa-----baki sadi bhasha te japani vich bahut antar hai...

October 6, 2012 at 6:00am · Unlike · 2
Dalvir Singh Gill main aahee kehnaN ki rooh haiku walee hove bss, hor koee 5-7-5 nahiN lagoo ho skda je kroNge tan oh uss rooh da gl ghuttu, kehnde taN shayad Ghai sahib vi iho neN androN.

October 6, 2012 at 6:03am · Like · 1
Dalvir Singh Gill ikk rhythm taN bajhjh javege naN tappiyaN jan kise vi folk form vaanG, haiku chete 'ch vassnge. main poora confuse krn di koshish karoonga.

October 6, 2012 at 6:06am · Like · 1
Sahib Singh hahahahha

October 6, 2012 at 6:07am · Unlike · 1
Dalvir Singh Gill naaaaaaaNN baee, has ke neeN srnaN, ja fir ghato ghat hassa taN dio

October 6, 2012 at 6:11am · Like
Umesh Ghai Sabi Bhaa Ji....... Most respectfuly pehlan apni soch nu je asin os kamre cho bahar kadh ke khuli hawa ch parwaz karn dayiye ta fer mainu bhanve bhore ch dab dewo te meri udari dekho......... soch da dayra thoda jeha khulla taan karo ......... Himmat ta karo kado tak eh sankiranta da saraap bhogde rahange? ......... ha ha ha ha ha

October 6, 2012 at 12:35pm · Like · 1
Dalvir Singh Gill Thanks everyone, and especially you Sital Di'

October 23, 2012 at 11:10pm · Like